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her words were his whiskey,
getting him drunk with every syllable
but she spoke with a rotting tongue,
the air escaping from corrupted lungs

her words were his drug,
spun of moonbeams and soft shadows
and her voice curled around him like cigarette smoke
eroding his ears like it eroded her bronchioles

her words were his poison,
whispering through his veins
just an echo of a soft voice
and dirt thrown on a coffin
lately, all I've been uploading is most of my old stuff. This is relatively new--I finished it, like, five minutes ago.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. It's sweetly sickening. It perfectly conveys the woman who both ignites a mans heart and burns it to a crisp. Beautiful work.
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you have been featured here: [link]
i would love it if you could check out the other features and :+fav: the journal! :heart:
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candlelions Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
I'll definitely take the time to read them all!
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's my pleasure (:
yay, thanks!
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Alcohol and sensuality - one of my favorite poetic mixtures. <3
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
It's so..... erotic in a way
and i love it.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
"her words were his drug,
spun of moonbeams and soft shadows"

The most dangerous kind. Nicely done!
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